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Wednesday, June 26, 2019

snip snip story hazel

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Quinn from St Francis. This is amazing because of the connection you made with each sentence in the post snip snop story Hazel.
    I like the part when it is turned into lots of different things I think that is very creative.
    Next time, you could maybe use some more capital letters.
    Why did you do it on Jojo Siwa?

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  2. My name is Stella and I go to St Francis. I liked how you have got it in a bright color so it’s way more easier to read.
    Did you know I like Dog’s because they are cute and cuddly
    Next time, you could add some more info about Jojo
    Why did you choose Jojo siwa?

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