Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, June 26, 2019
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi my name is Quinn from St Francis. This is amazing because of the connection you made with each sentence in the post snip snop story Hazel.
ReplyDeleteI like the part when it is turned into lots of different things I think that is very creative.
Next time, you could maybe use some more capital letters.
Why did you do it on Jojo Siwa?
My name is Stella and I go to St Francis. I liked how you have got it in a bright color so it’s way more easier to read.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like Dog’s because they are cute and cuddly
Next time, you could add some more info about Jojo
Why did you choose Jojo siwa?